我的信写好了，大家评价一下

洋洋0824

在第二楼。。。

[ 本帖最后由 洋洋0824 于 2006-8-29 16:42 编辑 ]

洋洋0824

亲爱的拜仁慕尼黑俱乐部：

      
这是我第一次给你们写信。我非常喜欢德国，喜欢德国人的严谨的态度，也非常喜欢国足球，我最支持的就是拜仁！因为我非常喜欢卡恩。四年前的世界杯，那年我12岁，我还不怎么喜欢足球，知识和我爸爸一起看。在决赛上，德国虽然输给了巴西，但是卡恩给我了深刻的印象。于是我开始喜欢上卡恩所在的俱乐部——拜仁慕尼黑。

我支持拜仁慕尼黑因为不仅卡恩，所有的球员都非常的优秀，尤其是卡恩、拉姆、施威因施泰戈、马凯 and so on

我认为拜仁是个非常优秀的球队。有非常优秀的球员和教练。但是有时候状态不是很好，所以希望能够调整好状态继续征战，中场位置巴拉克虽然不在了，但是我们仍应该团结起来。

希望拜仁取得更好的成绩。


我们中国，尤其是北京，是非常美的，希望可以有机会来北京，我们长城天安门，故宫and so on。

期待拜仁慕尼黑的到来。




                      永远的拜仁球迷

                           ZhaoYang

                           赵洋

[ 本帖最后由 洋洋0824 于 2006-8-29 16:49 编辑 ]

洋洋0824

Dear sir ,


I am an honest fan of yours from China named XXX（你的名字） .Although I live in the orient china ,I always look for every chance to watch your match on TV .I know you are one of the best clubs all over the world ,there are many world stars in your team like XXX,XXX and XXX （球队的明星名字）.In all your stars, I like XXX （你最喜欢的该球队球星的名字）best,he is the best player as far as I know.His nice pass ,shoot,skill often lead you to win each match.,I crary for all that.


I bagan to support you since 19XX（开始支持该球队的时间）,that year you get the champions of league,and I never forget that exciting time. From then I became your real fan.Last season you played not very well,you lost to XXX（该球队输给过的强队）,I think you had the power to beat any oppinent including XXX.I could not find out a reason of that.Perhaps you are lack of luck.Several days before I watched a match between you and XXX（几周内该队曾经交手的对手）,and at last you win the game with X:X（该队赢球的比分）,it is a good bigining of the road to champion,I hope you will do as well as this game and good luck will follow you forever.As your fan ,I long to see you get a champion again.


I think there are too many famous stars in your team,it is no doubt that they realy do work for the team,and many fans come to stadion to see the stars,but I believe sometimes young player could do more,they have more energy,power and the most importance is that they are the future of team,they need more chance,I hope you could grow your own stars like manchester united.Can you agree with me?

It is known to all that China is a beautiful country,we have the Great Wall,favourite food, lovely panda and esperially many your honest football fans like me.I hope I could have the chance to watch your match here,how happy it will be if it comes to true!I believe the day will come one day.


At china there are few souvenir of yours for sale,as your fan I long to get some from you,can you help me?I know it is very hard but I hear you are always very kind.


I long to get your letter soon.



With Best Wishes


Yours


XXX（你的名字）

洋洋0824

呵呵。。。。我觉得有点。。。。太傻了。。。。。

花匠鱼

批了批了，靠了，发什么鸟东西了

花匠鱼

第一句就鸭的太长乐，这么说没意思。谁给你写的？

要写的纯朴。

花匠鱼

I am an honest fan of yours from China named XXX

改成：

My name's XXX， i'm from China，a crazy fan of you。

这多好。写信要口语化，不能写太长。

洋洋0824

样版信…我才不用…只是看看有没有借鉴的……

洋洋0824

顶！
！！

real_no.1

有两个错别字



知识和我爸爸一起看。在决赛上，德国虽然输给了巴西，但是卡恩给我了深刻的印象。于是我开始喜欢上卡恩所在的俱乐部——拜仁慕尼黑。

第一、二个字

real_no.1

建议要写成中文，不用写成英文，这样才显得痴心、真诚。

不用担心看不懂的问题

洋洋0824

邮费很贵…日…那不白费劲了？？

花匠鱼

邮费不贵，寄个信能有多少钱。十几二十不得了了。几块钱估计就可以了。你鸭没寄过外国信阿

faterpan

价格在邮局有张贴，按重量计算。

洋洋0824

fater，我们班修MM特想看你德国游记…我特想问你带纪念品回来没有，卖我俩……

洋洋0824

哈咯…大家提提意见……

洋洋0824

顶起来。。。。

蓝齐儿

写中文吧，洋洋

tianyan

紧跟蓝齐儿的脚步

洋洋0824

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