信写的差不多了,大家帮我修改一下.我可不想写的和别的信虫一样!~

洋洋0824

亲爱的拜仁慕尼黑俱乐部：
   
这是我第一次给你们写信。我非常喜欢德国，喜欢德国人的严谨的态度，也非常喜欢国足球，我最支持的就是拜仁！因为我非常喜欢卡恩。四年前的世界杯，那年我12岁，我还不怎么喜欢足球，知识和我爸爸一起看。在决赛上，德国虽然输给了巴西，但是卡恩给我了深刻的印象。于是我开始喜欢上卡恩所在的俱乐部——拜仁慕尼黑。
我支持拜仁慕尼黑因为不仅卡恩，所有的球员都非常的优秀，尤其是拉姆、
我认为拜仁是个非常优秀的球队。有非常优秀的球员和教练。所以我希望能够得到拜仁的所有球员签名，还有一些小纪念品，可以满足我吗！！谢谢！！
           

                      永远的拜仁球迷
                           
                           赵洋(ZhaoYang)


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
我考!!!!样信!我发现我基本上看懂完全没有问题!!!!
Dear sir ,


I am an honest fan of yours from China named XXX（你的名字） .Although I live in the orient china ,I always look for every chance to watch your match on TV .I know you are one of the best clubs all over the world ,there are many world stars in your team like XXX,XXX and XXX （球队的明星名字）.In all your stars, I like XXX （你最喜欢的该球队球星的名字）best,he is the best player as far as I know.His nice pass ,shoot,skill often lead you to win each match.,I crary for all that.


I bagan to support you since 19XX（开始支持该球队的时间）,that year you get the champions of league,and I never forget that exciting time. From then I became your real fan.Last season you played not very well,you lost to XXX（该球队输给过的强队）,I think you had the power to beat any oppinent including XXX.I could not find out a reason of that.Perhaps you are lack of luck.Several days before I watched a match between you and XXX（几周内该队曾经交手的对手）,and at last you win the game with X:X（该队赢球的比分）,it is a good bigining of the road to champion,I hope you will do as well as this game and good luck will follow you forever.As your fan ,I long to see you get a champion again.


I think there are too many famous stars in your team,it is no doubt that they realy do work for the team,and many fans come to stadion to see the stars,but I believe sometimes young player could do more,they have more energy,power and the most importance is that they are the future of team,they need more chance,I hope you could grow your own stars like manchester united.Can you agree with me?

It is known to all that China is a beautiful country,we have the Great Wall,favourite food, lovely panda and esperially many your honest football fans like me.I hope I could have the chance to watch your match here,how happy it will be if it comes to true!I believe the day will come one day.


At china there are few souvenir of yours for sale,as your fan I long to get some from you,can you help me?I know it is very hard but I hear you are always very kind.


I long to get your letter soon.



With Best Wishes


Yours


XXX（你的名字）



_______________________________________________________________
大家把我的中文信改改阿~~~~哈哈......


Dear sir ,
I am an honest fan of yours from China named XXX（你的名字） .Although I live in the orient china ,I always look for every chance to watch your match on TV .I know you are one of the best clubs all over the world ,there are many world stars in your team like XXX,XXX and XXX （球队的明星名字）.In all your stars, I like XXX （你最喜欢的该球队球星的名字）best,he is the best player as far as I know.His nice pass ,shoot,skill often lead you to win each match.,I crary for all that.
I bagan to support you since 19XX（开始支持该球队的时间）,that year you get the champions of league,and I never forget that exciting time. From then I became your real fan.Last season you played not very well,you lost to XXX（该球队输给过的强队）,I think you had the power to beat any oppinent including XXX.I could not find out a reason of that.Perhaps you are lack of luck.Several days before I watched a match between you and XXX（几周内该队曾经交手的对手）,and at last you win the game with X:X（该队赢球的比分）,it is a good bigining of the road to champion,I hope you will do as well as this game and good luck will follow you forever.As your fan ,I long to see you get a champion again.
I think there are too many famous stars in your team,it is no doubt that they realy do work for the team,and many fans come to stadion to see the stars,but I believe sometimes young player could do more,they have more energy,power and the most importance is that they are the future of team,they need more chance,I hope you could grow your own stars like manchester united.Can you agree with me?
It is known to all that China is a beautiful country,we have the Great Wall,favourite food, lovely panda and esperially many your honest football fans like me.I hope I could have the chance to watch your match here,how happy it will be if it comes to true!I believe the day will come one day.
At china there are few souvenir of yours for sale,as your fan I long to get some from you,can you help me?I know it is very hard but I hear you are always very kind.
I long to get your letter soon.
With Best Wishes
Yours
XXX（你的名字）